goodbye.

only love poem i'm ever writing.

years before they loved
they hated.

they met, her being towering over his own.

and he hated her

because she was fire.
she was teh woman he couldnt have.
sexual and fuckable in everyway about her. he wanted nothing more every moment his eyes burned her to rip the clothes from her body

throw her to ground and continiously thrust deep within her being.
but alas who he was now was no more.




years later.

he was himself again.
and she was teh same fiery goddes.

only this time it was different


instead of passion and fire.
words were exchanged.

the heat between them intensified and not so that there skin longed to graze.

but there souls and breath wished to be more.

and so endless nights layed in the darkness.

fell to morning bathed in sun.



until finally there words fell at there feet.
and no longer could there body be denied any longer.

and as quickly as it started it was gone.

the goodbyes were terrible and tearful and choking.

there hearts grow heavy and the weight
not beared
had been carried.

the weight not wanted
the weight of love
brought them down.



and made them more alive than ever before.


even now i write.
my eyes puff. water.

my throat heavy with sadness.



i cant understand why the hard man i have returned to being.

cries endlessly at night.
from wanting her.




i love you.goodbye.

Author's Note

not my usual thing.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

anger.. heartbreak .. anger .. love .. sadness .. heartbreak .. anger ..

your writing is amazingly passionate, not necessarily in a sexual way but in the style you write it .. your words tumble without control and yet, yet they make extraordinary powerful reading ..

this is almost gentle in an intense way .. but only almost

[funeralmoon]

lustful, and hurt. like gasoline and lighters. not a great mix but when everything is on fire you can really do anything to save yourself. Good poem
*Moon,

[gimpy]

everthing as a begining that is quite different from the middle but remarkably simmuler to the end