Let's Build a Home

Let's Build a Home

A Poem by Alani
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Love is so close

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You and me... Let’s build a home

We’ll make it from perfect love and stone

Fill the air with sweet, sweet music

Cram our bellies with fun amusement

 

You and me... Let’s weave a mantle

We’ll snug in more love than we can handle

Breathe the air of inspiration

While our souls bathe in exaltation

 

You and me... let’s merge our spheres

We’ll make up for all those past lost years

Sigh sweet nothings our lips long to pass

Stroll through new adventurous paths

 

You and me... let’s build a home

We’ll make it from perfect love and stone

A haven so everlastingly strong

You and me... let’s sing our song!


© 2014 Alani



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~~~ A beautiful write written by a beautiful Alani ~~~

I love how you blend the words with the real or virtual feelings of love. Yeah, it`s true that without love there`s no home so, I do agree with you here ...

You and me... let’s build a home
We’ll make it from perfect love and stone
A haven so everlastingly strong
You and me... let’s sing our song!

~~ Lovely. Heartfelt lines ~~ All verses`re well written in your muse and what all I think is that this poem`s well enhanced like a great song ever indeed. And yeah .. love`s always SO close ;)

Congratulations for your this beautiful write. I adore the piece as I`ve always adored your earlier ones.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alani

3 Years Ago

Thank you Stephen :)
Probably one of my only love poems (of 2)... and I'm heading into writin.. read more
Stephen

3 Years Ago

My pleasure, Alani :)
Umm ..One of your ONLY love poems??? Umm, I think, your every muse`s ad.. read more



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This makes me want to get my hands dirty and mix some cement or pack some bricks!

I like how you extend the analogy further into also building a life together.

Great piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alani

1 Year Ago

haha!! That's so cool. Thank you! :)
Are you a guy? Because I would not expect a woman to ha.. read more
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Gee
A sweet write on love.Enjoyed this

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Alani

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much :D
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Sky
I really feel like to Build a Home with the beauty of your line We’ll make it from perfect love and stone...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Alani

2 Years Ago

I'm glad the poem resonates with you
Sky

2 Years Ago

Indeed it is...
This is a beautiful love inspired piece. It is inviting and brightly laced with emotions. It has a song like quality to it. Very good Alani, I really enjoyed this today. Loved weaving a mantle.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Alani

3 Years Ago

:) Thank you!
I am a songwriter actually.. if you like music as much as poetry, you can liste.. read more
willweb

3 Years Ago

I will do that right away.
~~~ A beautiful write written by a beautiful Alani ~~~

I love how you blend the words with the real or virtual feelings of love. Yeah, it`s true that without love there`s no home so, I do agree with you here ...

You and me... let’s build a home
We’ll make it from perfect love and stone
A haven so everlastingly strong
You and me... let’s sing our song!

~~ Lovely. Heartfelt lines ~~ All verses`re well written in your muse and what all I think is that this poem`s well enhanced like a great song ever indeed. And yeah .. love`s always SO close ;)

Congratulations for your this beautiful write. I adore the piece as I`ve always adored your earlier ones.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alani

3 Years Ago

Thank you Stephen :)
Probably one of my only love poems (of 2)... and I'm heading into writin.. read more
Stephen

3 Years Ago

My pleasure, Alani :)
Umm ..One of your ONLY love poems??? Umm, I think, your every muse`s ad.. read more
Love is in your heart, in your soul and even in every single blood cell flowing in your veins..i can sense that while reading your words, hope your guy understand the value of being loved and how lucky he is to be in your presence...beautiful work


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alani

3 Years Ago

Thank you Darling! The "guy" is somewhere out there... and I think this write up is an invite to him.. read more
A. Amos

3 Years Ago

All the best my friend and you're most welcome.

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Added on June 3, 2014
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Alani
Alani

Joburg, South Africa



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Most of the poems are now songs... you can take a listen to some of my songs at: www.soundcloud.com/alanikeiser ME: Singer-songwriter. I love Literature and poetry... I love stomping on crunchy dry.. more..

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