The Color of Your Eyes

The Color of Your Eyes

 

The color of your eyes cast me

off into dreams of wonder

The subtle shades of green

the ways in which they change to suit

your moods

 

The Color of your eyes sparkle

when you smile as with the

endless green of the oceans

spread wide

What a joy it is to hold

you close and gaze into them

 

The color of your eyes leave

me breathless with joy

What a treasure they are

Enchanting me with your sultry

gaze

 

The color of your eyes makes

me want to sing to the heavens

Endless poetry all for you

Descriptions that pale and never

do justice for the wonder that

they bring

 

Author's Note

All reviews are welcome.

Reviews

[Prose-full]

very eloquent..a very smooth flow...

great write..

[Whispering Aspen]

This is beautiful!

"The Color of your eyes sparkle
when you smile as with the
endless green of the oceans
spread wide
What a joy it is to hold
you close and gaze into them"

Every line is such a compliment, so thoughtful and loving, the subject must be blushing below those amazing green eyes! Thanks for sharing this

[JMariah]

The first word in the second line should be "off". Apart from stumbling here, the flow was very smooth. This poem is loving and tender and a very pleasant read. Well done.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Very beautiful, well written and inspiring. Lucky person to have someone notice their eyes in dept as such. Good write.

[Nely Amorim]

another gorgeous poem that makes me smile widely and fills my heart with love and joy... xxxx love u babe