The Promise

The Promise

A Poem by Albert Freeman
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poetry

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The Promise

 

 

 

I still believe in you

I'll always be here by your side

Don't leave me waiting

Please come back to me

I'll always live to love you

Some day we'll be together

I'll always wait for you

For you

for you

 

Everyday and everynight

I'll always dream that you'll be by my side

We'll always be together

I'll surrender my soul to you

Don't leave me waiting forever

Please come back to me

I'll always live to love you

I'll always wait for you

for you

for you

 

I don't care what you've done in your past

I need you

Can't live without you

Don't leave me alone

I'll always love you

Forever and ever more

I dream of you by my side

I'll surrender it all for you

for you

for you

 

Please come back to me

Don't leave me alone

I'll always wait for you

for you

for you

© 2008 Albert Freeman


Author's Note

Albert Freeman
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wow... thats all i can say... wow...

i always love reading your poetry, albert, especially your romantic poems - but this, i think tops them all. beautiful and wonderfully mastered, my friend. and the repetition of the line "for you" again and again just added to the touching sense of longing and desire to be with the one you live for. this was absolutely beautiful, my friend, absolutely beautiful...

smiles,
jess

Posted 15 Years Ago


who's waiting for whom?...lol lovely poem and the promise is duly noted ;) love ya xx

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Albert Freeman
Albert Freeman

raymond, MS



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I'm one of 5 boys born to my mother and father. My dad served 23 years in the Army. I served 6 years in the Air Force and enjoyed traveling to Korea, Japan, and Maryland while in. My interests vary, b.. more..

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