the Triumph of the Pen

I wanted to let you know that I chose your poem, The Triumph of the Pen, for the Editor's Choice article in BudzusHammer. I thought it expressed what it means to be creative and inspired. I think you are a very gifted poet and I look forward to reading

 oh winging Heart on a mission 

to the edge of forever, 

speed to the beloved with a message of Love.

 

We look in a different way, 

with the Heart do we see, 

and in that wondrous seeing, 

is the feeling of awes majesty! 

 

Yeah, that's the way to overcome 

the 'thought police' inside our head; 

doubt is the Heart killer 

and so with this pen, 

we’ll write our Hearts out again and again, 

and if they judge the words we say, 

to dash our Dreams in any way, 

then we'll write even more toward the whole 

for the writing life is our Loving goal!

 

This triumph of Love carried to our pen 

where in our written words Love lives again ...

 

A writer writes and never stops writing 

and rewrites and writes again and again ... 

and he never stops writing except to Dream, 

perhaps to reach for that Star in that Star crowded Sky 

and bring that Star to the end of his Pen 

and write like plasma all over again ...

 

 

Reviews

[a]

This poem, i think, really deserved the first place, all others - average, by middle-class charlatans.
Thank you for this poem! I loved the third stanza the most. This poem isn't very imaginative, but outstandingly expressive, says everything there is to be said.

[Poeticpiers]

your final stanza says it all my friend.
A writer writes and writes again
for not to write would cause him pain.
His only purpose to create
a poem which will clearly state
The message that he wants to share
with other people everywhere