Post-Aubade

Post-Aubade

A Poem by Alessander

I want to be the bed covers
You wake to
That your restless limbs
Have smothered
That your emanating body
The fabric
You have tossed-and-turned in
8 hours hence
Imprinted with your scent

And the mouthwash
You gargle
To swoosh-and-splash
Along your tongue
To be in you
Like a liquid ache
Sloshing
Waking


I want to be the fork
You pick your eggs with
My metallic spine
In your slight fingers
Your demure  hands
Scarred sustenance
Yolk sun

I want to be the comb
Tangled in your frizzy hair
Your wavy hair of smoke
And shadowed lakes
As soft as lint
Cascading

I want to be the cig
You light on the corner
To warm the brick morning
I want to hang on your quivering lips
Like an autumn leaf from a branch
I want you to inhale me
And let your body loose
Feel me utterly
Then exhale...

Let me evaporate
Into the nothingness I was
Before

You.

© 2014 Alessander



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This had me from the first line, so creative to use every-day objects no one thinks twice about, but you manage to make come to life so poignantly. Like other reviewers reading this caused my body twist and pulsate, especially in this stanza "I want to hang on your quivering lips
Like an autumn leaf from a branch
I want you to inhale me
And let your body loose
Feel me utterly
Then exhale..."

I don't think you can get any closer to person, I mean being their mouthwash!! :D

Utterly wonderful piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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oh the drudgery of love, you bring to life so well.
You somehow stay tastefully on point. This was so alive! damn cool.



Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alessander

8 Months Ago

Thanks , mercy. Glad u dug it
This piece is very well crafted. Normally I have criticisms, but I honestly do not with this piece. It feels very polished and finished. Well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alessander

9 Months Ago

Thanks, E.L.C.

Very flattered.
What a brilliant poem - beautifully manifested with raw and ripe emotions. Salute !


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alessander

2 Years Ago

Thanks, Shaheen! glad you liked it.
I absolutely love this more than anything. The sensory detail is just purely amazing. Every line is my favorite.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alessander

2 Years Ago

Thxs, Gabrielle! Glad you found it worth reading.
I am beyond envious that someone has awoken this amount of passion within you.
There is no better feeling, is there?
This piece is an absolutely perfect product of that passion, I love it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alessander

2 Years Ago

Thx, Venesa! Sorry, just got around to actually interacting on WC lol
you know, maybe there's something stirring, i really love this, it is soft and sexy

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alessander

2 Years Ago

Thanks, Emily! miss those iconic Emily hands! Hope you're doing well.
This had me from the first line, so creative to use every-day objects no one thinks twice about, but you manage to make come to life so poignantly. Like other reviewers reading this caused my body twist and pulsate, especially in this stanza "I want to hang on your quivering lips
Like an autumn leaf from a branch
I want you to inhale me
And let your body loose
Feel me utterly
Then exhale..."

I don't think you can get any closer to person, I mean being their mouthwash!! :D

Utterly wonderful piece.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, to be inspired like this is nothing short of wonderful... Brilliant and well crafted... Going to my favorites. Thanks and bravo!

Bed sheets smoother ... Yoke sun... The imagery and juxtaposing ... Great poem, something I would expect to find in published work...

Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alessander

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Fluffer. Hopefully, I come out with a book this year. We'll see :) Glad you enjoyed it.
Butch Decatoria

3 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Descriptive, as is your normal brilliance...sends shudders...through and over :) Sunny kisses for your day ♥

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alessander

3 Years Ago

Sunny kisses! Oh, and you and your sis look alike :P
Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Years Ago

Thanks darlin xo

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