Revolt!

Revolt!

A Poem by Alessander
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© 2011 Alessander



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Alessander
Malevich once more.

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A very loud message of anti-establishment seen and heard. This is most impactful. Sometimes it's what we don't see, what's missing, what is between the lines that is a poems biggest message. A most interesting and thought provoking write, and special kudos for the creativity expressed here.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Neat. I can totally see this plastered all over subways, telephone polls, billboards etc.
Sparking a movement.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Creative way of working out the topic, I think it could be understood in different ways. I usually like words only on bare paper for it leaves the reader space to imagine but somehow I like this one.

Posted 1 Year Ago


There aren't enough anarchists in this world, it's very rare that I see anything thought provoking of a political nature in poetry and I sometimes wonder why...

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is pretty marketable,if it was bigger it would make a cool poster or print and look pretty cool on a wall. This is also, something that the youth could groove on-- know what i mean.
Okay, so here it is-- Break and down are two accented words. If they were side by side they would be a spondee. The way they are spaced here makes them even more impactful. So hard in fact they hit like a hammer and seem to knock the two "e's" out of "perception". By breaking down the perception of
"perception" the word "revolt" is altered or changed. The "e" is turned around and crossed out. Like it's a new way of saying revolt-- which is a revolt in and of itself. Henceforth, by creating a new revolt and an altered perception the result is “this is your” or our "rebirth". Also, i didn't just read this in sequence from top to bottom, meaning if this was hanging on the wall it's a work of art that's has continuity to it delivering the message of rebirth, revolt, and the break down of perceptions simultaneously or in what ever order you wish to read it or contemplate upon. Well, it makes sense to me. But the whole point of this illustrated work is to make you think-- so mission accomplished. I dig it!


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very loud message of anti-establishment seen and heard. This is most impactful. Sometimes it's what we don't see, what's missing, what is between the lines that is a poems biggest message. A most interesting and thought provoking write, and special kudos for the creativity expressed here.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don't be a bystander of life, great sentiments for the new year. Love the style and message. Hope big brother is not watching.. Ha ha this is the Internet everyone is watching!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Re-read...
Perception altered...
Stripped clean...

xoxo

Posted 5 Years Ago


Whoa dude. This is just too cool to know what's going on right now. Looks awesome.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple yet powerful, I enjoy this form.

Posted 5 Years Ago


OMG

Posted 5 Years Ago



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