The blissful life of Claudia

Wrote this poem based on the image.

The girl turns around to look at me,

With a rush surging through her delicate body.

The climb to bliss awaits her.

Her heavenly hair waves in the light of day.

Her smile imprints in my soul.

Her eyes invite me to go,

But then she leaves me behind.

She leaves me behind with no one,

Alone, thinking of her.

I ponder about life itself.

Thinking and thanking she is in a better place.

Reviews

[Tamika Finley]

This is beautiful and it matches the image. Before I read the quote, it seemed as if you were writing to a dear friend that passed away. The beauty of art; it can be interpreted in an infinity amount of ways

[PoeticChico]

It truly is... Thanks for your lovely comment!

[SmittyJas]

Tender and lovely poetry written for a true friend whom touched your life indeed.

[Emily]

Very nice poem!
Loved it!
Keep it up!!

[PoeticChico]

Thank you!

[Laura S-C]

This was an incredible poem that added so much to the picture and the emotion behind it was great.

[PoeticChico]

Thank you for the wonderful review!

[Wicahpi]

Hi Alex, thank you for your entry into the Picture Poem This Contest. Love turned into Tragedy ... I like your expression, choice of words, imagery. Fits the given image well.

[PoeticChico]

Hey! thank you for the wonderful muse and your kind words!

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of description.
"With a rush surging through her delicate body.
The climb to bliss awaits her.
Her heavenly hair waves in the light of day."
The above create perfect beauty and nice visions. I liked the ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[PoeticChico]

Thank you for the kind word, I always appreciate your opinion! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.