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In the deepest day of the deepest nite, when the clouds fly quick as if with fright, and the people change - their attitude and gestures darkly bright, and some presume with naïve guesses seeking light - A wondrous girl amongst it all stands out, alone, and with all power flowing thru her now.....chooses mercy and acceptance, soothes all difference, every opposite unites.....The dream I had, the one before....the time I met you first, again....again....

Reviews

[PaperLife]

Oh wow I can feel the power just surging through this poem. And through your thoughts.

It's an emotional poem with a quick snap of the fingers to explain it all where only the most beautiful of minds could have possibly spoken the true meaning behind the happenings. In just a few short sentences you've created a world with every other parellel in a painting, that can only be changed by creation. It's like you've taken every color invented ever with one or two strokes blindly feeling and painting with the passion and liveliness of your heart and pieces together this amazing poem.

I watch as someone different stands out glowing like a light with dark patches inside.

Well done.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A short, yet inspiring piece that leads the crafted mind askew! x