Pine

It was the way the grass swayed

that made the world fade

and your brown eyes

free of any disguise

mix up my world

in chocolate swirls

i thought i might fly

when the gentle breeze sighed

i thought i might melt

when just then i felt

your hand squeeze mine

and the brisk smell of pine

remind me of you

the way you coo

when you want a kiss

caressing me in sheer bliss

you told me your thoughts

and we connected dots

then we levelled

and all that was dishevelled

became so much clearer

and i felt so much freer

walking in the middle of the road

making the pavement our abode

taking ownership of the space

like our own secret place

hugged by trees

begging us to release

every word that needed to fall

but also to say nothing at all

i wonder if you knew

that just then my love for you grew

that my heart found a new

beat

that my pulse had a new

rhythm

that i found a new part of me

that had suddenly come across

you

Reviews

[NathanBlackie]

Love is hard to describe and you come pretty damn close for someone just using words.

[Lydia]

I love this! Such great writing and it kept my attention all the way through.

[AleyshaRosa]

Thank you =]

[RachelReaper]

Aw, this is very good! Its a very unique approach to a love poem and I must say I really like it, like its bliss in an all new kind of way, that isn't just *mushgush*, its real happiness.

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks =] I really appreciate it, and I was really hoping it wouldn't come off a being "mushgush" ( =P ) and yes, that moment, that day, was true happiness.