Sedona Mornings

An improvement on my first poem

The blooming orange and pink sunrise
Gives way to swaying butterflies
The singing of waking birds
Is like a symphony from Mother Nature

Unwinding by large red rocks you can't compare
While enjoying breezes cool in the Fall air
Listening to waterfalls in far off distance
Will make all your worries end in a silence

Author's Note

Please tell me what I can do to make this poem better!

Reviews

[Bala Gorthi]

Thank you, You have given me a beautiful morning view which silenced all my worries.. For a while it was me and the nature..
As far suggestion, just keep reading a lot, keep paying attention to the words of seniors and reviewers and your writes will better up. As for this write, it is beautiful..
Keep sharing.. Keep writing.. Keep reading..

[Kathy Van Kurin]

I want to enteryour words! If you would like to make it even more focused maybe removing excess words so that it becomes a focused picture. This is something I have been counseled to do by a few other more experience writers than myself. Take a look at my stuff and see what you think. Blessings you are doing great work!