Happy Birthday to me

Happy Birthday to me

A Poem by † Allybear!!! †
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I turned 14 today!!!!!! :)

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Happy Birthday to me

Do you like what you see

This girl looking back in the mirror

Is she turbulent rush in life's river

 

Will, I ever know who I am

or will I be just the same

I wish I knew the answer

for Life aint a game

 

I wake up everyday

feeling empty inside

My feelings, my heart

Sometimes wanna die

 

but I love too damn much

I get stepped on often

I am a doormat to wipe feelings

I'm a sponge to most men

 

Will naievity keep claiming me

will i ever grow up

for age is a number

Will it ever be enough

 

Happy birthday to me

I hope you like what you see

I dont really know if I do

to my ownself be true

© 2012 † Allybear!!! †


Author's Note

† Allybear!!! †
idk.. really why I wrote this. I just looked in the mirror, and well, A bunch of confusion just kinda came up! I hope you like the poem

<3 Alliebear

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Well written birthday wish to oneself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That confusion when looking into the mirror, is known by others to that's for sure, nice write and hope you had a good and Happy Birthday :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

As a girl I can understand and I am sure any other girl could too.
This was a great write and really just love yourself cuz it's the best thing you could do.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A really great poem and very well written...I can quite understand how this goes...Anyway, happy birthday!
:)))

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a very good poem and its very easy to relate too :) I think any girl who reads this poem will understand completely

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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&dagger; Allybear!!! &dagger;
† Allybear!!! †

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Hey I'm Alice, but pple call me Ally, or Allie-bear I am 14 years old and I love to write. Im kinda new to it, but its fun, so I thought it would be cool to try it. also my brother was JefferyQuincy .. more..

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