My demons

just a little diddle

when my body becomes numb

when my brain doesn't run

what will become of my demons

when i die young?

what will become, of the things i grew to love?

Reviews

[FIN]

So saddening; thus far it's been those last sentences which strike home, for me.

Well written; and expressed. I love the shortness of it, by the way. Simple and blunt.

[Alice]

Just the way I like to keep it. Thanks for the review !

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's an interesting thought you gave here..
"what will become, of the things i grew to love?"
We are alway so curious about the things around us.. about what our future holds for us.. the caving never stops.. Beautifully written.. :)

[Alice]

Thank you so much. Many people have demons but see them as angels, never seeking the truth in what they belief because deep down they know they would rather keep it hidden..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yes I totally agree.. You are most welcome :)