Drenched in the rain

Drenched in the rain

A Poem by AlinaTheCacti
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Sad moments of life :'(

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Downpours the sticky gum,
Sticking to the memories tonight,
The roof is made of pictures,
Of the choices that I made,
Soon it'll drown
As I will too

Thinkin' back to the day,
Where my life was the same,
Death
Bankruptcy
And Pregnancy,
But one thing wasn't the same,

Rejection wasn't on the list,
Nor was it in the script,
People are so damn confusing,
With no plan and so...
So...
So...
Unpredictable

Once I thought I would succeed,
With the friends,
With the money
With the popularity,
With the individualism,
But I had one thing that I wanted to experience
Love.

The pain to receive was unbearable,
I wanted it so damn much,
I went to Tinder and chose the first man I fell for,
We shared a night and life took a twist,
Twist after Twist
Death after Death
Now I'm stuck, 
I need inspiration
I need it now.




© 2018 AlinaTheCacti



Author's Note

AlinaTheCacti
This doesn't represent something about me, I just felt the urge to write it

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You say you felt a urge to write this poem.thats when you should write.this reads like like your mind is crisscrossing with images and memories confusing one with the other.very descriptive with your words set at a well paced tone.nicely done

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Added on January 31, 2018
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Tags: inspirational, emotional, memories

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AlinaTheCacti
AlinaTheCacti

Canada



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I'm a EXTREMELY younger writer that loves to draw, read and write, compared to many others more..

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