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This was an assignment for my english class. A petrach sonnet.

I do not believe of love at first sight,
because it was a kiss that stole my heart,
and thats when the drama began to start,
and I´ll never forget that fateful night.

They say that love is pain and it does bite,
I must agree that to love is an art,
I feel like I was struck by a love dart,
I swear that I have never felt sooo right!

And yet I couldn´t help feeling lied to,
some secret I wasn´t supposed to know,

what did I do to deserve this my boo,
how could you have fallen so damn low,

because you broke and shattered my heart so,
tell me baby how to forgive you.
 

Reviews

[Clockwork]

Wish I got assignments like this in lit. Class. Good form.

[Wildecat]

Excellent flow, easy to read, nice work.

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awesome!...very awesome!!

[Vaishali..^_^]

it's a awesome write...very well written....great work....!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I loved this piece of writing a lot, flowed very well....
You have conveyed your feeling here very beautifully!
Great work :)