The Musical of the Forest

Just a fun poem about never giving up.

The fairies danced around me

The flowers followed the breeze

The river called me to it as it froze 

The grass sang a song of glee 

The squirrels came out of their nest

To see the musical of forest

They sat in their tiny acorn seats

Watching it from afar 

The goblins heard the commotion

Charging it left to right

Breaking every acorn seat

Leaving the squirrels affright 

Everyone touched by Discords hand

But they didn't let him win the fight

Picking up the pieces of each shattered dream

The fairies danced around me

And the grass started to sing

Author's Note

Hope you like my poem! Its cute and sends a good message!

Reviews

[ElizaB]

Thank you for entering your work into mu competition.

It is important to never give up, even if at times that can be the easiest way. I really enjoyed your imagery, it was very sweet.

[Norbanus]

This lovely verse has left me with
a spinning aching head.
I asked my muse (with all his pith)
to ease my squirming dread.

But even though, he knows it all
this time he took a pass.
"No way," he said, "I'll let you call
me out to face this class

So here I am left all alone
to try to make a rhyme
that's graceful and atoned.
I give a feeble effort just this time
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The feelings that our cheers expose
are fragile as this gentle rose,
Awaiting dew and something new
To sing that it’s not froze

We see the squirrels and goblins too
All dancing in the spring
The music shows us what to do,
to make discords can take wing.

Despair and bits of shattered dream
are trampled in the ground,
as fairies dance and joint the team
to implanted smiles all around.

But fates of lovers still depend,
on how their views of life can blend.