The Dreamers

Thought a poem about dreams would be cool, hope you like it!

Dream one:

Closing your eyes, your imagination takes control

In a deep trance, you see the new world

Flying candies and talking pets

Walk you through this magical land

You see a friend and join their path

No one cares where they end up

Dream two:

Closing your eyes, your imagination takes control

In a deep trance, you see the new world

The person you like is at the altar

Ready to take the next step in life

You walk down the aisle, and your heart fills with glee

No one can ruin this romantic dream

Dream three:

Closing your eyes, your imagination takes control

In a deep trance, you see the new world

All jumbled up, can't see a clear thing

Feels like you're high on life and everything keeps moving

Seeing rubber duckies and numbers in the sky

Frogs run the world and you can't help but wonder why

Dream four:

Closing your eyes, your imagination takes control

In a deep trance, you see the new world

You see your friend dead, lay limp in the road

You run to her house and see her sister alone

You hide with the police and think you're safe

The killer comes in and chases everyone way

Waking up, having almost died and you start to feel the tears in your eyes

Dream five:

Closing your eyes, your imagination takes control

In a deep trance, you see the new world

Black and emptiness fill the space

You're floating through time

The abyss pulls you in, and you can't escape

You try to escape this unlawful fate

Morning:

Waking up from each dream

REM seizes at moving

Now awake and ready to daydream

Author's Note

Please leave reviews! I would love to hear what I need to work on or what I should keep doing!

Reviews

[John Ciarmello]

I feel comfort in the way you write. I say that not only because you have talent, but because of your age! I don't say this with any malice of thought. I simply recognize that you are unique. I'm happy to see a portion of your generation still in tune with the hidden things in life, and the fact that a dream truly is a dream! I'm happy of the fact that there are still constructive past times, and genuine thought! Please keep writing and share your talent with your friends you never know when there may be a closet writer near, you can inspire! Best Wishes AllauraRose!

[AllauraRose]

Thank you much for the kind words! I really appreciate the review and feedback! I actually know of a closet writer who doesn't share his poems right now.

[John Ciarmello]

Hook him up. He will love to share once he has! Maybe start a writing club? Present a format for teenage closet writers! Just an idea!

[AllauraRose]

I have thought about that actually, me and him discussed it before. I have read some of his and they are beautiful, but he doesn't like to share them. I'm just happy I was given the pleasure to read them.

[CM-Stars]

“Seeing rubber duckies and numbers in the sky,
Frogs run the world and you can't help but wonder why.”

What a charming line! The randomness of our subconscious sometimes lol

[AllauraRose]

Thanks, I tried to think of random things that sound crazy. Glad you liked it!

[CM-Stars]

Wow. The imagery in this poem just took my imagination for a lovely and terrifying ride.

Beautifully written!!

[AllauraRose]

Thanks for the review! I tried to make this very vivd, and I'm happy you enjoyed it!