time ... endless time

time ... endless time

A Poem by Allen Smuckler
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My last whack at e.e....we're on a first name basis now...I actually made it easier to decipher, otherwise you might stop reading it & whatwouldBthe.in that...:))

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a

     ru (ss) ian

                                    class (stud) on-l-y (ies) to                                    (le

 

)arn           ss(ru)ian              .

 

thew   at ch keeps time;

                                    n

                                      d

                                        l

                                          e

                                            s

                                              s              t…….i……….m………..e………………

 

b            u            t                                                   4  w

                                                                                     h

                                                                                     a

                                                                                      t ???????

se (sun) ize                         the             gnizalb   

 

                                         &

pu(i) t                                          to

                                                      rest;

 

en (moon) gulf                                      the                         (face (less)

 

                                                   &  

sac) fice (ri                                                            4or                        the

 

                                   

                                    s                                                                      p      s.

                                                                                                                        t

                        ,s                        t                   &                                 l            e

                                                                                                              a    n

                                                                                                             

                            r                        a

 

WAIT a        (min)           

                                    I

                                       ‘ve               (ute)!             NeVeR

tak (en                                                                                 u

                  a                                                                      class  .

                                                                                               s

                                                                                                ian            

                                                                                              


© 2013 Allen Smuckler



Author's Note

Allen Smuckler
February 15, 1974 (from "The Missing Years"...)

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Wow, very nice indeed, refreshing to see this style i must say :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Allen Smuckler

4 Years Ago

just trying to offer something fresh to others...though this style is anything but...I fooled around.. read more
This style is brilliant. Where does it originate from? Thanks for sharing

Posted 4 Years Ago


Allen Smuckler

4 Years Ago

It originates from e.e. cummings....a poet from the 50's and 60's who changed the landscape of poetr.. read more
The Elusive Mr Dunne

4 Years Ago

I did not know that. Now this is interesting. I shall definitely be checking him out. Thank you for .. read more
Ahhh.. that was nice n unseen style... Though at first I was ":O" what n how its written..... But as I read along, I got in the grove of ur writing style.. Nice work :)
Next time try to keep it more simple plz , for pe0ple like me ^-^

Posted 4 Years Ago


Allen Smuckler

4 Years Ago

I agree with the simple part smile....in fact, I actually changed some lettering because I thought i.. read more
smilempsn

4 Years Ago

Well I think, its just matter of time for readers like me.. to get in the grove of your structural w.. read more
I'm so fascinated by this style of poetry. I'm very tempted to try it myself sometime. I think you captured the essence of the style very well.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Allen Smuckler

4 Years Ago

It's really not that difficult Sunni...come up with a 3,4, or 5 line poem...could be more or less, b.. read more

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Allen Smuckler

Sarasota, FL



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I'm a poet, a singer, a peaceful gunslinger.. looking to share my poetry..and a little bit of me...if I dare I 've been writing since I was 18.... am slightly older now, and still trying to fin.. more..

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