freedom

i act different because i am different

                  
                                                         

   

    

w(here)

                                                         can

 

                                                            i                        ro

              

  mp ( &                                              

                                                                                         p  lay)

 

with                                                            people/out

                                                                                        

                                                            l                g           

                                                              a            n                 m        g

                                                                 u        i        or          a     n

                                                                     gh                           ki

                                                                      

                                                                                                                                                                                                       fun(of)me

                       it                                         ‘               s                    so

 

                                                                                                                                           won (ful)der

                                       to

                                                                                  

    b(alive)e

                                                                                              l

i dont care              w                                                              p

                                h                                                           o       thinkofme.                                         a             e

                                     t                the                                p

                                                                                        

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Pax]

whoa! awesome and very cool format...
everything is in place, we are born to be free and unique in everyway...
great, great, great!

[Dhaye]

Awesome! You are creative. But I like the thought. You're great.

[Maya Storm]

WOW this must of taken a bit of time to craft.. You definitely got my attention. Well crafted my friend.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Let me tell you this one was one that really makes the brain and eyes stand up and take notice. love the format. Another unique and well placed write ...excellent Allen.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photo and the words. There was a movie once with blow-up doll. I like that one too. I like the way you use the words to create a entertaining poem.
Coyote

[Craig Froman]

There is a brilliance in the fragments of letters and thoughts... it's as if a new world of words opens up, shaded in vibrant colors of life... Filled with courage and introspective dances...

[Sagar Waingankar]

Beauty when it hardly means to be mean!

[Rosalind Gale]

My dear Allen,
What a grand (my mom's word) surprise! I have read Cummings on many occasions and this is a worthy contriubution to the style. And yes, to care or not to care on thoughts and feelings of others towards us - here you make a wonderful case for individuality, both in 'life' and in 'poem structure.'
Much love,
Rosa -x-
PS - I have not forgotten your book!

[Raven Starhawk]

Very crafty I must say but a sound quality is what ultimately makes this outstanding. You have a vivid imagination. Very well formed.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very cool, know nothing about cummings, but I loved how this was put together xD