Endless Journey

Concrete minds, abstract lives,

master of your fate.

The tired man at last arrives,

while you just sit and wait...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

this reminds me of my brothers son after graduating college and getting ready for grad school I need a break he kept saying

[Rosalind Gale]

... eternally simple and profound Mr S ;) -X-

[Mama Topaz]

Just made this a favorite. Simplicity at it's best!

[Becky C Strukamp]

this brought to mind that so many times we are sitting waiting for things to happen not realizing it takes some doing ...thats my interpretation ...another wondeful and thougth provoking poem. Love it!

[lei]

short but very powerful.. i like short poems and this one is really really good...

[imagination101]

This is like a puzzle that one has to think upon a piece it together. So much meaning in simple lines.

[Trusting]

Hmm... I like your style. It makes my brain think.

[Lily Mae]

I love how your words capture perfectly the scene in the picture.. That's why I like using art with poetry.. I like the visual along with the words..xo :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Really a nice pick of words.

[*** Hey Jude***]

This makes for a striking thought, as you intertwine the visual with the written word! Well done ~ Jude :-)