Ten Thousand Skies

Go lay in the field

And let the golden dawn wash over you.

Listen to the sway of the yellow grass surrounding you.

 

Let your thoughts dance around you,

And watch as they create dreams of purple,

Red, and blue.

 

Reach into the ten thousand skies above you,

And let the embrace of Earth Mother keep you

In harmony with yourself.

 

 

Reviews

[KAREN]

I liked this! Nice work! Makes me want to go lay in a field and look up at the sky!

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This is quite amazing! You have talent. I like your style.

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

Very comforting read, this little poem has enveloped me into such a state of imagery, I dont think I want out of.. great job. Bravo!

[Ang]

I love the imagery and the feeling of peace when reading this. Your poem has such a calming feel to it. This piece is adorable! Great poem :)

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I love the use of colours to describe the things that move us..lovely

[Tara♥Undefined&h..]

Wow! That was fantastic. The imagery was vivid and the whole poem had this intensity about it! I just loved this. its going into my favorites!