The girl

The girl

A Poem by alvarie

the girl she sees is broken, though she doesn´t show, she bends and breaks and her smiles help her cope
she cries and cries and lies, lies to herself, to her friends her family and her teachers
 she lies about how she's doing, she says she's fine that she'll be alright. they don´t really know what really happens inside 
the girl she sees stare at her giving her an uneasy feeling but the feeling she feels is sympathy
 She knows she can´t accept her and she knows the world won too but It hard just to ignore the girl 
the girl is standing in the mirror

© 2017 alvarie



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alvarie
Ignore grammar error

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I wonder why so many people write ignore grammar error i think form is important too. Theme your poem is very strong. Lies can destroying anything nice. On other hands lies can help us also survive. Your poem have nice smooth flow. I think just large letters are hard to read. Also i will be make more longer version explain why she lie. Whats her real reasons more explore her personal feelings and people what she lie to you.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Thank you for entering my competition.

It is a shame that the girl you speak of in your poem is so lost. However, there is a moment of hope when you mention how accepting the world can be.

I think it is important to remember that.

Once again, thank you.

Posted 2 Months Ago



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