The pain.

The pain.
The pain was too intense.
I couldn't survive.
The days; the nights.
I would cry myself to sleep.
I could not handle it.
A scream, I woke with every night.
The haunting image of you.
You and your last words.
Many people were concerned.
I would not eat; would not drink.
Would not communicate with anybody.
Nobody at all.

Author's Note

Critique?

Reviews

[The DuchessPoet]

I like this!
very well done!

Thank you for sharing your talent in my contest!

[Marquise de Ville]

I love it!
I can feel the pain and the emotions.
It really reminds me of the situation Bella had in New Moon.

=)

[Gypsy_Moon]

Beautifully expressed write, lines speak volumes without going overboard. True talent. A joy to read. Gypsy_Moon

[Shellie]

This is great Aly, you know you are very good with short poems. Have you been writing long? People make the mistake of thinking because your 'new' on this site or sites like this that you are really a NEW writer.

A scream, I woke with every night.

Love this line, the way its written not like i woke with a scream bla bla...this is better. It shows a little 'loneliness' that all you had at night was the sound of your screams. Well written poem with a defeated tone and raw emotion.