When love ends.

When love ends.

A Poem by Aly
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When love ends,
Everything in your world changes;
Disappears.
Your dreams turn to nightmares,
You don’t know where you belong.
Your face seems alien,
And you turn your back on your friends;
On life.

© 2009 Aly


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We all envolve and change,great poem, thanks for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


So true. It does take time to find your feet after love is gone. Well said.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very ture indeed.....when the love is gone and ended your light kind of leaves with it and your lost in this world for a second...but just a second, you find yourself again....I LOve this :-) great job!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Aly
Aly

Brisbane, Australia



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Im Aly. Im awesome. Im in grade eight. I love my friends ♥ Jacula Jordan ♥ 6 Months ♥ Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :( I love you guys ♥ Kthx.. more..

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A Poem by Aly