HAIKU- Candle.

HAIKU- Candle.

A Poem by Aly
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My scent fills the air
And I am slowly burning
Flickering wildly.

© 2009 Aly


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Congrats on your winning Haiku! Well done!

Author: Nancy Lee Shrader
Haiku Smiles

Posted 15 Years Ago


Great haiku! Very original...I love the theme of it! Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!! :)
-Alaska

Posted 15 Years Ago


What a candle would say! Nice!

Posted 15 Years Ago


A great Haiku piece ~ THanks for sharing in the contest~FranMarie

Posted 15 Years Ago


I like it. It paint's a candle with the candle's own voice. Syllables right on. Good Haiku!
Just Me.
Captain Ugly.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love it!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 13, 2009
Last Updated on January 18, 2009

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Aly
Aly

Brisbane, Australia



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Im Aly. Im awesome. Im in grade eight. I love my friends ♥ Jacula Jordan ♥ 6 Months ♥ Im gonna miss everybody from primary so much :( I love you guys ♥ Kthx.. more..

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