The Moon

The Moon

A Poem by the girl in the dress

She comes out and shines every night
Between the stars dances her light
The freckles on her face are a beauty
To every man in and around the city
She runs away every once in a while
And everyone misses her lovely smile
She is a beautiful vision to the eye,
A beauty as precious as goodbye
Just like us all she fades and grows,
And for the show maintains her pose
She hides away a part of her
And dims her glow in winter
She always looks so young and pretty
Fills every women's soul with jealousy
I stare out my window every night
Awestruck by how she shines so bright
Every night alone in my room
I look out at the beautiful moon.

© 2014 the girl in the dress


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Nice personification of the celestial, not unfounded either as the moon not only governs the tides of the sea, but also the womb. The menstrual cycle coincides with the 28 day cycle of the moon. So enough comparitive ammunition to use right there. Always looking so young and pretty.

Indeed a thing of wonder.

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the girl in the dress

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :D



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Beautiful use of the moon. I enjoyed the way you described her beauty.
"She is a beautiful vision to the eye,
A beauty as precious as goodbye "
Above lines were perfect. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


the girl in the dress

9 Years Ago

Thank You :)
Nice personification of the celestial, not unfounded either as the moon not only governs the tides of the sea, but also the womb. The menstrual cycle coincides with the 28 day cycle of the moon. So enough comparitive ammunition to use right there. Always looking so young and pretty.

Indeed a thing of wonder.

Thankyou

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the girl in the dress

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :D
I agree, the moon has a very unique brilliance to her. Not only that, but she is powerful, effecting the tides and even moods of the people beneath her light. Gorgeous piece, keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


the girl in the dress

9 Years Ago

Thank You :)
I would guess your a night person? I love the way you showed beauty with flow

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the girl in the dress

9 Years Ago

I equally love the sun but yes night is more blissful
thank you :)

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Added on July 17, 2014
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