After All

She's nuts and witty, not hot, never sexy, but I do remember. I remember after all...

After all

 

He asked her the question,

She gave him his mind. He answered in riddles, 

She’s puzzled throughout

Now he’s talking again, “You know you sound bland"

 

She was there yet no one noticed,

She’s like the wind that no one sees

But hey, she's there...

She existed, in a world where she doesn't belong,

She fought, in a battle that was ever wrong...

 

She bowed her head, she spoke her heart,

But people look, she’s crying out loud

She made a mistake, she shouldn’t have existed,

But she is a woman strong at her mind,

but ever gentle; gentle at heart

 

She said she’ll be gone, that’s true she will be…

Because at one moment she’ll be here,

But forever won’t allow her to be

 

Be wary of a smile, they might be tears,

be wary of laughter’s, they might be fears…

She’s been referred to as haunting,

And yet she doesn’t know she even does a thing

 

She always wanted to paint the sun,

She always wanted to sing with the birds,

She always wanted to walk on courts,

But hey she ended up teaching babes

 

She’s eccentric,

She is weird,

She is nature,

She is strong,

 

But she is a woman…

after all

 

 

 

 

 

-Amata Luna

Author's Note

I made this while talking to a man. You know me all. 'I speak not in riddles', if you still remember my earlier poem. I'd like to hear your mind and your heart about this one. Thanks in advance for reviewing, reading and rating it up. Hope you'll enjoy this one especially for us femmes. :D

Reviews

[Thea]

Wow...This really fits the world of the females! Heehee! The idea is very creative and I love how it flowed throughout the piece...T'was very interesting to read this kind of topic...I can quite relate myself in some of the lines here, haha! You did an excellent job here, Amata!
Keep it up!
:)))

[Jed Sabffle]

WHOOOW.. haha, this is very striking.. you're speaking in behalf of all the girls!
I can hear all of you speaking in my mind! :DD
So i clearly got the message. xD
We boys should treat you very important. You're a woman "after all".. that don't deserve to be hurt.

I like the lines,
Be wary of a smile, they might be tears,
be wary of laughter’s, they might be fears…
I loved their meanings :)

well-crafted and well-stated.
very fantastic! Thanks for sharing! :D

[CHRIS ANDES]

your an imagist
=]
good words

[Ellen Brook]

This is awesome. Women are often considered inferior than men. Your poem is touching yet it's loud and STRONG. Great work! keep it up.

[Stephan Klok]

1 word: talent.