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A Poem by Amazonia_08

Got a thought fleeing from my mind, 

they always say don't say it if it ain't kind,

it's running quite a distance, 

as if it fears for it's existence,

I may not be so used to spitting truths in a rhyme,

but not trying is not a crime, 

unless you don't stand up and speak it in a short syllable,

and make a stanza worth fill-able,

So don't hate my thought and give it a strike,

better yet hate,

but don't forget to leave a like.


© 2014 Amazonia_08



Author's Note

Amazonia_08
I know some may view ain't as a real word, so I apologize.

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i use ain't all the time for fun, hehe.
i really like the unique idea of this poem - one of my favorite lines is "they always say don't say it if it ain't kind" - it's true, people say that if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it, but people speak anyways, don't they? i like how you ended the poem in almost a rebellious manner. great job with this!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazonia_08

2 Years Ago

I was poking around, trying to make this sounds light and carefree. Thank you. :)
hannah

2 Years Ago

well, you achieved that! c: again, nice work!



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My opinion aint much so will just say,
bravo ! You write real good,.
------ Eagle Cruagh

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting poem, I liked it :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


This sounds like facebook LOL...


But not everyone is mean
and shows Hate.


Nice work this was a interesting piece.


God bless. Benita

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazonia_08

2 Years Ago

Thank- you.:)

God bless you too.
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

2 Years Ago

You're welcome I was submitting some pieces on helping hearts network for a contest and saw your p.. read more
i use ain't all the time for fun, hehe.
i really like the unique idea of this poem - one of my favorite lines is "they always say don't say it if it ain't kind" - it's true, people say that if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say it, but people speak anyways, don't they? i like how you ended the poem in almost a rebellious manner. great job with this!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazonia_08

2 Years Ago

I was poking around, trying to make this sounds light and carefree. Thank you. :)
hannah

2 Years Ago

well, you achieved that! c: again, nice work!

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Amazonia_08
Amazonia_08

Phoenix, AZ



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I love to write even though I face writer's block, and can become grammatically challenged at times. I absolutely adore animals of all shapes and sizes, and love to hear feedback to improve my writing.. more..

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