Random Feelings

Random Feelings

A Poem by Amazonia_08

Crazy feelings inside my head,

Makes me feel like I’m going brain dead,

Feeling like I don’t belong,

This makes me feel extremely strong,

 

Sometimes life just doesn’t make any sense,

It makes life have more suspense,

From subtle stare from passing strangers,

Cause I have different life adventures,

 

While other girls curl their hair,

I like to play games like solitaire,

While they put lipstick as red as the hearts,

I am musically inclined all over the charts,

 

I love to climb trees and play all sorts of sports,

And ignore all the eye shadow shades of all sorts,

I am slow to come up with ideas to write,

Even though outside the moon is full and bright,

 

I seem to finally have begun to see my differences,

And I don’t care about anyone else’s indifferences,

I applaud those that go and beyond,

And especially those that leave a review and respond.

 

 


© 2014 Amazonia_08



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Amazonia_08
Review Please. ^^

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I love how you've structured this! At face value, it's an eclectic analysis of feelings, but underneath they all relate to embracing differences and individuality. Just a quick note - in the first line of your last stanza, you've written: "I seem to finally have begun to my differences..." I think there's a missing word there, might be worth checking that out. But it's a really good piece anyway, well done! :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazonia_08

3 Years Ago

Oh my gosh. xD I'll fix this up right away. xD



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its beautiful! And honestly soo relatable!!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Well structured, well wrote, the grammar shows no signs of being incorrect. Lovely Poem! Except for one slight tip on the last stanza, i think someone down in the comments has pointed it out. but over all, the poem is wonderful

Posted 1 Year Ago


I`m not such a hot poet , but I love yours.
Try a couple of my little stories, you`ll be hooked
I promise.
Thanks for the loan of the poem.
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 3 Years Ago


This was brilliant. I actually read it twice since it was so captivating. Well done!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazonia_08

3 Years Ago

Thank- you. :)
I love how you've structured this! At face value, it's an eclectic analysis of feelings, but underneath they all relate to embracing differences and individuality. Just a quick note - in the first line of your last stanza, you've written: "I seem to finally have begun to my differences..." I think there's a missing word there, might be worth checking that out. But it's a really good piece anyway, well done! :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazonia_08

3 Years Ago

Oh my gosh. xD I'll fix this up right away. xD
I love how you've structured this! At face value, it's an eclectic analysis of feelings, but underneath they all relate to embracing differences and individuality. Just a quick note - in the first line of your last stanza, you've written: "I seem to finally have begun to my differences..." I think there's a missing word there, might be worth checking that out. But it's a really good piece anyway, well done! :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on December 7, 2014
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Tags: #Differences, #EmbraceYourself

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Amazonia_08
Amazonia_08

Phoenix, AZ



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I love to write even though I face writer's block, and can become grammatically challenged at times. I absolutely adore animals of all shapes and sizes, and love to hear feedback to improve my writing.. more..

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