Random Feelings

Random Feelings

A Poem by Amazonia_08

Crazy feelings inside my head,

Makes me feel like I’m going brain dead,

Feeling like I don’t belong,

This makes me feel extremely strong,

 

Sometimes life just doesn’t make any sense,

It makes life have more suspense,

From subtle stare from passing strangers,

Cause I have different life adventures,

 

While other girls curl their hair,

I like to play games like solitaire,

While they put lipstick as red as the hearts,

I am musically inclined all over the charts,

 

I love to climb trees and play all sorts of sports,

And ignore all the eye shadow shades of all sorts,

I am slow to come up with ideas to write,

Even though outside the moon is full and bright,

 

I seem to finally have begun to see my differences,

And I don’t care about anyone else’s indifferences,

I applaud those that go and beyond,

And especially those that leave a review and respond.

 

 


© 2014 Amazonia_08



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Amazonia_08
Review Please. ^^

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I love how you've structured this! At face value, it's an eclectic analysis of feelings, but underneath they all relate to embracing differences and individuality. Just a quick note - in the first line of your last stanza, you've written: "I seem to finally have begun to my differences..." I think there's a missing word there, might be worth checking that out. But it's a really good piece anyway, well done! :-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazonia_08

2 Years Ago

Oh my gosh. xD I'll fix this up right away. xD



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its beautiful! And honestly soo relatable!!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Well structured, well wrote, the grammar shows no signs of being incorrect. Lovely Poem! Except for one slight tip on the last stanza, i think someone down in the comments has pointed it out. but over all, the poem is wonderful

Posted 10 Months Ago


I`m not such a hot poet , but I love yours.
Try a couple of my little stories, you`ll be hooked
I promise.
Thanks for the loan of the poem.
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 2 Years Ago


This was brilliant. I actually read it twice since it was so captivating. Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazonia_08

2 Years Ago

Thank- you. :)
I love how you've structured this! At face value, it's an eclectic analysis of feelings, but underneath they all relate to embracing differences and individuality. Just a quick note - in the first line of your last stanza, you've written: "I seem to finally have begun to my differences..." I think there's a missing word there, might be worth checking that out. But it's a really good piece anyway, well done! :-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazonia_08

2 Years Ago

Oh my gosh. xD I'll fix this up right away. xD
I love how you've structured this! At face value, it's an eclectic analysis of feelings, but underneath they all relate to embracing differences and individuality. Just a quick note - in the first line of your last stanza, you've written: "I seem to finally have begun to my differences..." I think there's a missing word there, might be worth checking that out. But it's a really good piece anyway, well done! :-)

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on December 7, 2014
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Tags: #Differences, #EmbraceYourself

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Amazonia_08
Amazonia_08

Phoenix, AZ



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I love to write even though I face writer's block, and can become grammatically challenged at times. I absolutely adore animals of all shapes and sizes, and love to hear feedback to improve my writing.. more..

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