My story

Three years ago that was the time
when I was forced to be his toy
and now I write it with this rhyme
innosence stolen by a boy.
I am weak and he is strong
I did not know that this was wrong
I can't tell because he hurts me now
I want to get away but I don't know how.
Every day you come back to me
I wish I could get away from this reality
but you always come back for more
and leave me laying on the floor
then you say
every day
I will be back tomorrow.

Author's Note

I am sorry if nobody thought it was nice, I just wrote it because I do not know what else to do.

Reviews

[matrixmark]

Considering you are just 14, this was really impressive. I am all for reading pieces which are done by a younger age, as they are our future bestsellers. Yes, there were errors BUT it didn't distract from the power of your words which came across as hard hitting, strong and powerful.

Mark

[Amber]

Thank you! I really appriciate it.

[matrixmark]

Good to read.
Keep writing.

Mark.

[Daphnee]

This is a beautiful poem. Ernest Hemingway always said to write the truth, even if it hurts. You are so brave and amazing for writing this.

[Amber]

0.0 oh wow thank you soo so much, that means so much coming from an amazing writer like you!

[Rimpi Saikia]

The poem's amazing. The fact that you're just fourteen makes it all the more awesome. Good luck!

[Amber]

Thank you so much, it means alot.

[Silver]

its brave , sad and powerful writing

[Amber]

Thank you.

[Davidgeo]

You have potential... very impressive.

check your spelling.

Keep writing... I like your voice.

[Amber]

Wow thank you so much.

[Taz]

This poem was stunning, it really was especially for only being fourteen. You remind me of myself in so many ways. Good work.

[Amber]

Thank you so much, I am so happy you liked it!