Been So Long

It's been so long since I last saw your face,
It's been long since I have been feeling this pain,

I dream of you every now and again,
But when I'm awake without you I'm filled with pain,

You are so far away and we are far apart,
Wanting to be with you everyday tears up my heart,

Dreaming of you is such a pleasant feeling,
When I dream of you, I don't want to stop sleeping,

I want to say your face and smile right now,
But there's no way for me to know how,

I wish to see you everyday of my life,
To fulfill that one dream I strive.

Reviews

[girlandpen]

I don't know if this is about a breakup or a death, but either way, it's really good. The rhyming sometimes feels a bit forced, but you're ideas and concepts are there