Green Eyed Blue

Green Eyed Blue

A Poem by The Flawed

 

My green eyed girl’s got the blue girls blues,
Feels like she’s aged over night,
Hopeless and helpless,
With no one to hold her tight,
And now there are demons dancing round the hot ashes of her dreams.
 
My green eyed girl’s got the blue girls blues,
She took back all that she ever gave,
She thought what she did was brave,
And now there are demons dancing on the grave of her hot love.
 
My green eyed girl’s got the blue girls blues,
Remembers passion, lust and trust,
Back when she had full control,
Now they’ve clipped her wings, and caged her soul,
But deep down inside her I think she knows,
That if she’s brave enough she still has a choice,
As she watches the demons dance their last dance.
 

© The Flawed

© 2009 The Flawed


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A rather sad, tragic and dark poem but brilliantly written. But there is hope for her, and that is nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is sooo good!

My favorite line:
"Now they've clipped her wings, and caged her soul,"

Asolutely gorgeous!
Keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Awesome...what else can I say? You write with passion and intensity ! Wonderful write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Hope in the hopeless...nice job.
--Storygirl

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

my green eyed girl's got the blue girls' blues - you really have a way with words, you really do..

another amazingly poignant piece...your words really are worth falling into..haven't read something like this in a long time

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This was so dark and deep.
In the sentence: "With no one to holed her tight," I think you meant "hold."
A great piece!
~Lauren

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh, wow. . . you've mixed those blues with something darker, and it works so well . . .

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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