Fading letters....

Fading letters....

A Poem by Arielle Ann

Sometimes when we stare long at letters,they fade &jumble.Similarly if we ponder upon a decision , its pros &cons too long,we may fumble,gradually turn unsure & ultimately unable to do what we wanted.


Gazing long

like letters fade

thoughts in the air!

© 2012 Arielle Ann

Author's Note

Arielle Ann
I hope I have been able to convey what I wanted...hope the meaning is clear.It was actually an idea for a poem,I thought how it would look as an haiku :) (Pardon for any mistakes and pl feel free to point out errors-still raw in haiku)

PS-by "thoughts" I wished to mean"decisions" but couldn't find any appropriate word..if it sounds awkward ,I will be very thankful if you can provide me with suggestions :)

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Short but yet filled with a lot of meaning! Great job:)

Posted 7 Years Ago

YES!!! well done!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago

Great effort..!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago

I enjoyed this attempt!

Posted 7 Years Ago

As an haiku,I loved it..! You have mastered the art of brevity !!

Posted 7 Years Ago

Yay...Amazing...Not that long enough but very well penned!

Posted 7 Years Ago

Few words ...
writes a novel in my heart ...this was so great :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

Good word coined for this haiku. Meaning for this may be manifolded. Most appropriate words for the views of everybody. Views may differ but it reveals good truth. Best wishes.

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great Haiku!!!!
I love this one! So much meaning in this message!

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on January 4, 2012
Last Updated on January 4, 2012


Arielle Ann
Arielle Ann

Bangalore, India

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