Fading letters....

Sometimes when we stare long at letters,they fade &jumble.Similarly if we ponder upon a decision , its pros &cons too long,we may fumble,gradually turn unsure & ultimately unable to do what we wanted.

Gazing long

like letters fade

thoughts in the air!

Author's Note

I hope I have been able to convey what I wanted...hope the meaning is clear.It was actually an idea for a poem,I thought how it would look as an haiku :) (Pardon for any mistakes and pl feel free to point out errors-still raw in haiku)

PS-by "thoughts" I wished to mean"decisions" but couldn't find any appropriate word..if it sounds awkward ,I will be very thankful if you can provide me with suggestions :)

Reviews

[Reaper]

short and sweet

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I love this.... So much meaning in short verse.~Letters do fade, but thoughts are yours forever. Nicely done!

[abhas]

what anyone relates is their personal perspective... but that they can relate is your applaudable achievement .... great work... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like these words. Letters do fade. But memories will stay with us. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[R J Askew]

We are like little letters in our lives.

Thought provoking trigger as all short poems should be.

[Frantzuu]

Another great one. There is great meaning in this piece.

[BlueDreams]

Whoa! i can see elegant meaning in just three lines .. It was a Great piece .. Liked to read :-)

[Seanne Tholltree]

it can also be somewhat related to friends...