A Poem by Arielle Ann

Expectations in silence

when shattered repeated

ego outshines emotions!

© 2012 Arielle Ann

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nice poem - i totally agree! but i think it has 19 syllables instead of 17 so.. it's not really a haiku. (the same thing happened with me, when i wrote my first haiku)

Posted 6 Years Ago

Amazing piece

Posted 6 Years Ago

true... bt not a haiku... bt great job

Posted 7 Years Ago

good subject matter. great job

Posted 7 Years Ago

Awesome dear, good writing. I am expecting this type of haiku from your pen. With immense pleasure and happiness. Great job. A lifetime achievement in the carrer of Haiku writing. With regards.

Posted 7 Years Ago

...Next time will be different... This works, the twist made me stop and ponder the meaning, as it should.

Posted 7 Years Ago

awesome haiku

Posted 7 Years Ago

yeah true ego really outshines emotion..

Posted 7 Years Ago

COOL ........


Posted 7 Years Ago

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Arielle Ann
Arielle Ann

Bangalore, India

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