Haiku~Ego!

Expectations in silence

when shattered repeated

ego outshines emotions!

Reviews

[Thea]

Aw, aw!!! Just f.a.n.t.a.s.t.i.c!!!
You know it's hard to express something deep in just few words yet you've done it...Another great write...
I'm loving your haikus...Keep writing!
:)))

[Warren L.G De Mills]

Word! I think I have some Hiakus and I never knew they were hiakus. Maybe I should upload them? I didn't know things like these were so well appreciated here on the cafe. Good one. You just made me into a Hiaku-writer-uploader :) lol

[Manpreet]

Nice one!

[SINDE]

Well said in the shortest way possible. Awesome display of wit!

[No name]

This was a nice write, really enjoyed reading. Someones pride can sometimes get in the way.

[Cassie Fraga]

very nice!! and yes sometimes pride just gets in the way of everything... nicely done!!

[MsMermaid]

Not strictly the 7/5/7 classic Haiku form. But 7/6/7 works too. This one made me want to read it several times to get whatever deep message is contained in your Haiku. Maybe I'm over thinking it. I do that sometimes. I enjoyed reading your Haiku.

[Sahar moonlight]

that was so short.yet full of meanings. nice one

[Priscilla Sayers]

Sometimes it is ego that outweighs emotion which is a sad fact. The haiku is fabulous. You are really getting these down to perfection!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Very Nice! I love this... I sense pride. Too proud to give in to emotions; Too proud to say "I'm sorry" or "I love you"... Words witheld, that should have been said. Thought provoking Haiku! Great job.