Just "a" drop

Just "a" drop

A Poem by Amrita Sharma Pokharel































A drop 
from the deep-sea

Of those pains and angst
breaks out

Glides down…

All the rebellions
of the hard ‘heart’,

Pauses

Holds the unfathomable breath,

Unease tentacles

The gorge between

The eyes and the heart

 

Lost thoughts
Dilemma
Hits,

Beats,
trembles,
And

Bursts out
from the guiltless eyes
Just "a" drop of tears…




© 2011 Amrita Sharma Pokharel


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Nice poem..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah! Another beautiful poem. It was a very touching one. Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Is a tear truly the substance of ones vision freeing itself in the only way possible? This inspires me to think so..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing write:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bursts out
from the guiltless eyes
This is the most powerful line in the poem... Good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong words and a beautiful artwork.
"Unease tentacles
The gorge between
The eyes and the heart"
A very good ending to a amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The poem is as great as the picture lol. Nice write and great job on this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good! Short, but powerful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Simply very in depth.. Lovi it

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Amrita Sharma Pokharel
Amrita Sharma Pokharel

Farwest , Nepal



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I am neither Emily Dickinson nor am unnoticed ripples of emotions.. I am in search of light within in me ..... gone through many tunnels....to behold the lights at end but ...found the emptiness..... more..

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