Mr Edwards Funeral...

Mr Edwards Funeral...

A Poem by Amy Azra Dean
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Based on a true event, it was not me thank goodness!

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I promised to attend this funeral,
So I guess you have to go,
His name was Mr Edwards,
Little about him I know,
I rushed to the crematorium
Some of these women staring at me,
Did not think ought of it,
Just thought i'd let it be,
Stood in the stalls for it to begin,
The doors on the place shut tight,
It was only then It dawned on me
I was at the funeral of Mr Wight,
The songs began so I had to sing,
Embarrassed I curled up inside,
Now I know the women staring at me,
Thought I was his bit on the side.

© 2013 Amy Azra Dean


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Funny. I'm glad it wasn't you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amy Azra Dean

10 Years Ago

And me! thankyou for the review :)
A well written piece - amusing way to make the most of an embarrassing situation! Thanks for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amy Azra Dean

11 Years Ago

Thankyou for reading my poetry, thanks! :)
Light noted upon death. A well written poem...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amy Azra Dean

11 Years Ago

Thankyou very much for the review! And for taking the time to read my poetry, glad you enjoyed it :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
even for a true event this is a good write
the flow of it makes it more then readable
like the creativity and well placed words
thank you for sharing truly

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amy Azra Dean

11 Years Ago

Thankyou very much Im so glad you enjoyed it! thanks for the feedback :)
Very humourous, liked this very much.
Bit on the side. :) love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amy Azra Dean

11 Years Ago

Oh Im glad you liked it and found it humourous, thankyou for the review :)
Brilliant poem, I love a little tombstone humor as I call it.
flows beautifully, lighthearted and worth a chuckle
Keep it up :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amy Azra Dean

11 Years Ago

I am to make people chuckle or slightly smile at least if i can :) yes a bit of Tombstone humour! th.. read more
Did not think ought of it,
Just thought i'd let it be

This phrase just really jumped out at me, I like the way it was written

I love the surprise ending!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amy Azra Dean

11 Years Ago

Im glad you liked the ending, it worked then :) thanks for the ongoing feedback :)

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Amy Azra Dean
Amy Azra Dean

United Kingdom



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I am a filmmaker ,editor and writer. I enjoy writing humorous,lighthearted rhymes or poems which are personal to me in some way. I normally write them on my phone and collect them as I go. Then pour .. more..

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