Dew

Dew

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
"

I love...

"
I Love Dew
~~~}{~~~

If love were like little soft droplets of moisture
Clinging to fragrant rose petals
On a fresh Spring morning
Then I would say
I love dew.

And would you say
You love me, dew?

~~~}{~~~


© 2016 Ana Papaya



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Author's Note

Ana Papaya
Ok, it's cheesy but I thought it was cute.

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That's the cutest cheesiest thing ever :) and I don't even like cheese that much

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

Thanks, I think these silly ones are my most favourite. :)
Still makes me chuckle...

It's cheesy.... sure.

But this cheese stands alone. (as omar would say) (farmer in the dell thing...)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

I know, it made me giggle when I wrote it too. :)
Seemed so simple and silly. I'm glad you .. read more
Dave

2 Years Ago

Anytime doll face.
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SKY
Yes for sure! I love dew drops they rejuvenate me on every sunny morning :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
SKY

2 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Extra cheese outshined by a soft, warm reading. Lovely.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much. :)
All that's missing is the song :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lyn Anderson

2 Years Ago

Ah, my secret love. Singing. Sure. But you have to play the guitar.
Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

If I played guitar it would be transformed into a metal song. :)
Lyn Anderson

2 Years Ago

just the way I like it. heavy.:)
well, here is a "cheesy",but "cute", "little thing" that is just so much fun and good to read !! so there ;0p
still smiling from the "dew"...

redzone

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

thx, i am glad you like, i'm surprised but pleasantly so that this one is so liked. :)
redzone

2 Years Ago

well bg knows all so no more shyness lol... and she is watching.. uhho..

it's true, .. read more
Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

she's a sweet one ain't she? :)
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Gee
Ah, the rabbi says yep....like this

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

yay. :)
thx.
I really do love dew. I drink diet Mt. Dew, for one thing. Also, I love taking photos of flowers with dew (but it's so hot & dry here, we don't get much dew). Also, I love when my dogs walk along with their noses buried in dewy grass, then they put their faces up to mine, with dewdrops still clinging to their noses. In short, I think this dewy little snippet could be fleshed out to a much greater degree . . . a regular Ode to Dew . . . not just this apologetic little ditty that you call "cheesy" (you need to banish your self-editor please). I get the feeling you don't value your superb ideas, so you stop yourself from really jumping into a topic & playing with it for awhile. It's like you are shyly excusing yourself before you even get warmed up about this. But regardless of all my blathering, I love this as a quickie, too. The brevity resembles the topic itself . . . tiny & rare & delicious & thirst-quenching.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

Oh well it just figures you'd call me out on the shyness. :)
I you drank regular Dew I just .. read more
barleygirl

2 Years Ago

*tee! hee!* (((HUGS)))
this is so good! i really like it keep writing :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

Thanks shadowine, you are very nice and I appreciate your encouragement. :)
reminds me of the Beatles...

"love me do/dew"

freshly romantic this piece is.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana Papaya

2 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob. Lol. I hadn't thought of the Beatles! I'm so glad that you did!

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