Birds and Bees

Birds and Bees

A Chapter by Closed
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I stood there still among the trees 
My breath the only sound 
As the birds and bees all gathered 
To touch upon sacred ground 

I listened as the blue bird 
Changed its solemn tune 
And the honey bees stirred sweetly 
Beneath the crescent moon 

And still I stood among the trees 
My breath the only sound 
Watching as a feathered prince 
Stepped forward to be crowned 

 "I am a bird, my Queen a bee" 
He spoke to all who gathered 
Declared the love within their hearts 
Was all that really mattered 

And with my breath the only sound 
I stood among the trees 
Wondering if this is what they mean 
When they talk of the birds and bees 

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© 2016 Closed



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Hopeful and beautiful words for nature and love. I enjoyed the description. You made the places and thoughts come alive. Thank you Ana for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


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2 Months Ago

Thank you Coyote, I really appreciate your lovely comment! :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

Always my pleasure to read your work and you are welcome Ana.
Wow! What a darling of thought, romantic, magical, a lift of my spirit as I meet you in air.

Regards,

Al

Posted 1 Year Ago


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1 Year Ago

Thank you very much Al! :)
Alfred Kukitz

1 Year Ago

What about the Feather print?
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Sky
So easily they have expressed their love and shared love with ease. Birds and Bees luck enough to hang around the trees. I like this read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Closed

1 Year Ago

Thank you, I appreciate your nice comment. :)
Sky

1 Year Ago

Pleasure all mine. Welcome :)
You pose quite the question following some intelligently thought out verses.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Closed

1 Year Ago

Thank you kindly my friend.
You sort of think this should be the birds and the bees. Certainly a whole lot nicer than the stalk flying through the air. Great write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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1 Year Ago

Hello Paul, thank you so much. :) The stalk flying through the air, yeah. Whole 'nother story.read more
Flawless rhyming and rhythm. Great personification. A magical walk through the woods. Loved it, Ana. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


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1 Year Ago

thank you Lydi. I am so happy this came out ok. :)
I am out of the woods now, having spent ti.. read more
Superb lyrical penning. Ana:) Fantastic work:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


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1 Year Ago

Thanks Pryde!!
Oh the imagery and the serenity of nature, Ana you hit home all the time... This is so well done with nature's truest and most amazing beauties which we often times miss to witness with our busy life... I like use of the gentle fonts here... Sweet and peaceful write...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 1 Year Ago


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1 Year Ago

Thank you my sweet and peaceful friend. :)
Inject Positivity

1 Year Ago

Thank you too Ana...
A wonderful nature poem, must be those Canadian sensibilities, hewers of wood and haulers of water and all.
One small thing...He spoke to all had gathered...maybe...He spoke to all who gathered. Other than that a great piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Yes, yes I did. Thank you for reassuring me that your self esteem is intact.:0
Closed

1 Year Ago

yeah, sarcasm doesn't come across well in text does it. :)
Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Oddly, sometimes we don't read it, and sometimes we do. That is why texting is a tricky business amo.. read more
This is a really serene, peaceful sound. I know that moment, when you are out in nature. So quiet, but so ALIVE ... beautifully expressed here.
p.s. it's does not need an apostrophe 2nd stanza, 2nd line.:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


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1 Year Ago

The apostrophe fairy added that I think. (Aka auto incorrect)
:) thank you.
Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

More than likely. She keeps me in business. lol.

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