Midnight Menagerie

for fun

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When at night you go to sleep
You might be surprised to know
The little creatures that you keep
Sneak out to put on a show

Little Milly the tubby tumbler
Wears her fancy tumbler pants
A silly kitty is wee little Milly
As she does her tumbling dance

And you may think your Guinea Pig
Is afraid of big tall heights
But she can walk a thin high wire
Dressed in her purple tights

The flashlight there beside your bed
Shines upon a shoe box stage
And here comes little Timmy Tuba
Out from his hamster pet cage

Bouncing Betty bunny sure is funny
Telling her hop hop jokes
And did you know a goldfish can juggle
Without breaking any egg yolks

And proud Mary that sweet soul canary
That bird can sure sing you know
The ants from the farm, crawl up on your arm
The best seats in the house for her show

The mice come to the party too 
Bringing their wine and cheese
Squirrels peek in from outside your window
Dancing on the branches of trees

As moon starts to set and sun starts to rise
The creatures return to their places
So that when you wake up and open your eyes
You'll not see their mischievous faces

They'll be so tired and will sleep all day long
And you'll just think they are lazy
Creatures playing all through the night?
Well now, that just sounds much too crazy.

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Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love this poem! I love the playfulness & your sing-song timing. Your rhyming is tight & some verses have that bouncy-fun limerick feel of rhyme & rhythm. I love writing about nonsensical creature get-togethers, but you've got me beat by a mile. I need to write a poem about what all the critters are doing inside my neighbors' houses, while evacuated becuz of fire! Thanks for the inspiration. I love how your imagination goes so far outside the dots with vivid descriptions & dynamic action! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Ana Papaya]

Wouldn't it be funny to imagine they've taken up residence in the evacuated house and the nonsense that goes on. :) thank you always, Margie, for the visits and generous comments!

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this poem dear Ana. The poem create a world of life and dance for our pets. You create good visions and happy pets. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Ana Papaya]

Thanks Coyote , for reading my silly nonsense!

[Coyote Poetry]

It is not nonsense dear friend and you are welcome.

[Howard Savage]

This is a very creative story as well as a realistic story. Great write.

[Ana Papaya]

Thanks. I'm glad I'm not the only one that can see how real this is.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha! love the lightness (could have been a nightmare;)..enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme ..made me feel like a kid again! nice one my friend!
E.

[Ana Papaya]

Thank you very much. :)
I think this is why I don't sleep at night.
All the racket... :)

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks for the 'nother chuckle :)))

[Alfred Kukitz]

Oh boy! What a show! Can I get tickets, bring a friend, maybe eat popcorn?

I feel the sweetness of this poem embedded into your DNA, Ana!

Regards,
Al

[Ana Papaya]

You're sweet. Thanks Al. Yes, I'll leave tickets at the door. :)

[Davidgeo]

Have you ever read "Old Possum's Book of Practical Cats"? After reading this I just know you'd love it.

[Ana Papaya]

I have not but you did recommend it before I think.
Thank you for reading.

[Ana Papaya]

I just ordered it today. I will have it in about a week.
I ordered the hardcover book with illustrations. It's described as a children's book.
That was a nice surprise.

[Davidgeo]

It was always my favorite children's book. The names of the characters still make me laugh. It's what Andrew Lloyd Weber based the famous musical "Cats" off of.

[Ana Papaya]

Thanks. I'm looking forward to it. I like children's stories. And yes, I remember you saying it was the inspiration behind cats. Which I have not seen but wish I had.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a fun one. As I have often said, these are the writes where your light shines brightest. The clever, witty mommy.:)

[Ana Papaya]

Thanks so much, that is the best compliment ever. I do love my mommy role best of all. :)
I read these to my kids and I do feel pretty special when I see they like something I've written.
My daughter often will draw the pictures.

[Lorry]

"Clapping, laughing and smiling"
Ah, that was awesome. It really did make me smile to see that others too take delight in the silly. Brilliant. :)

[Ana Papaya]

Thank you Nemo. I love the silly too.
I am so glad you liked this one. Thanks for the really nice comment.

[Lorry]

Thank you for liking silly :)

[Lorry]

Yeah, I know I have already commented on this, but I just woke up, having my coffee and read it again.....Great way to start the day. I am so jealous of your silly :)
Have a great day/night/other.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a late night frolic...much fun, as the animals act like the Marx Brothers....and then during the day, sleep lazily...making us wonder if they ever do anything at all..

my friend has a kitty...hides in one room all day...and then bam...night comes and she is down the stairs and having the time of her life.

j.

[Ana Papaya]

haha, that's funny. :)
I knew they came alive at night!
Thanks Jacob!

[PhoenixDown]

This is great. Frothy, fantasy, magic. I love how the end gives an explanation for their seemingly lethargic behavior. Bravo on this one. Neat, sweet piece.

PH.D

[Ana Papaya]

Thank you kindly doc. :)

[PhoenixDown]

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