my jealous heart

my jealous heart

A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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my jealous heart 

shies away from the sun

where lovers walk together

in open display

while my love lies

packed away

(not hidden)

if you look carefully  

you will find

a smile, a word

a look that searches your own

for something

enough to reveal

that you love me 


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© 2016 Ana Papaya



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To be the one who notices others and sees them for what they truly are, flaws and all, can seem like a lonely place to be, but it is quality, not quantity that will let that other person see us for what we truly are and maybe that shared moment will spark more to follow.
Beautifully penned Ana. I especially love the line "a look that searches your own", that's what it is all about and what we all would like to see.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry.

10 Months Ago

Good vibage? I like that. Tell Santa that if you see him :)
Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

I will for sure!
Lorry.

10 Months Ago

Thanks. I sent him an e mail to tell him how good you've been too. :)



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Makes me think of all the potential lovers who could be walking together, too. The problem isn't so much people not speaking up enough. The problem is usually more people not listening or seeing...

Lovely. Top notch work/expression.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Yeah, that's true too, for sure! Thanks again P!
Beautiful graceful pen babe! Nemo kinda expressed my feelings about this. R xo

Posted 9 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Thanks Rach, yeah... He's a wise guy that Nemo. :)
Thanks for reading this!
aLittlePain

9 Months Ago

All good yo!
Scanning for the spark that lights the way into another heart is a time-consuming and seemingly fruitless task but on we go, forever scanning and all the while the world carries on - oblivious to our limbo state.
I like that jealousy isnt envy here and that hope reigns supreme in the looking.
:))

Posted 9 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Thank you Tony, hope reigns supreme!
Tony Jordan

9 Months Ago

It does that Ana, it does that...
It's my pleasure to review your work.
:)

read more
Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

read more?
I'm guessing there's nothing more though?
don't know why it does that...
The balance of love. Should we do or should we not.
"a smile, a word
a look that searches your own
for something
enough to reveal"
I did like the above lines. I believe we fear love more than we should. Love should be a fearless journey. Old age make every love a worthwhile dance. Thank you Ana for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote
that you love me




Posted 9 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

9 Months Ago

Thanks for the great comment!
Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Ana.
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Sky
a look that searches your own
for something
enough to reveal
that you love me

Those lines are beautiful. Ahh they are.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much Skyfall! :)
Sky

10 Months Ago

Welcome Ana as always you're ;)
ah Papaya, so tender a touch with a longing to find an equal touch from someone, a returned smile and seeing the feeling is also shared... kinda like a song for a lost chord... and for what it is worth, a ;0)..

an amazing poem Ana...

redzone

Posted 10 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

a lost chord... I like that. Thanks red!!
Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

a lost chord... I like that. Thanks red!!
To be the one who notices others and sees them for what they truly are, flaws and all, can seem like a lonely place to be, but it is quality, not quantity that will let that other person see us for what we truly are and maybe that shared moment will spark more to follow.
Beautifully penned Ana. I especially love the line "a look that searches your own", that's what it is all about and what we all would like to see.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry.

10 Months Ago

Good vibage? I like that. Tell Santa that if you see him :)
Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

I will for sure!
Lorry.

10 Months Ago

Thanks. I sent him an e mail to tell him how good you've been too. :)
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Really lovely but sad. Like missing/longing/waiting...
Its Saturday morning here, so I wish you a lovely weekend Ana : ) Starz x

Posted 10 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Have a good one Starz! And thanks!
...

10 Months Ago

Thank you, almost 5am not long home from work...dreamland soon.
Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

sweet dreams...
There is a deep sadness to this one, Ana. When someone is looking for love, it is painful to see others holding hands, laughing, and enjoying life. You hope someone will love you again....the way you should be loved. The emotions expressed here are so real. Lydi**

Posted 10 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

Thank you Lydi. :)
This was nice, a little sad, too. Not a love poem, not a heartbreak poem, just a waiting and a longing poem. Something a little different today.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Ana Papaya

10 Months Ago

thank you so much James. :)

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