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A Chapter by Ana Papaya
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she always turns the lights off
          before stepping into the water
  she's gritty, like sand
scrubbing hard to wash it all away
because she can't bear to look at the stain

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© 2018 Ana Papaya



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Wow, this paacks some punch. Felt more like a donkey kick to the chest, when I realised why the lights were out. Seeing through her eyes, I sensed even a fear of breathing, in case it made ripples and could be heard.
I am impressed at how much you can fit into a few lines. Ive read books with less detail.
Impressed, and slightly jealous at your talent.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Weeks Ago

thank you Lorry, you are very kind :)



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Powerful, left a strong image with me Ana. So much said here.

Chris

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much Chris. I appreciate the comment.
when I first read these words.. I struggled to catch breath... an incredibly powerful kidney punch deftly delivered.. I salute ya.... N

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Weeks Ago

thanks so much Neville, I appreciate the comment
Neville Pettitt

3 Weeks Ago

pleasure..
Wow, this paacks some punch. Felt more like a donkey kick to the chest, when I realised why the lights were out. Seeing through her eyes, I sensed even a fear of breathing, in case it made ripples and could be heard.
I am impressed at how much you can fit into a few lines. Ive read books with less detail.
Impressed, and slightly jealous at your talent.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ana Papaya

3 Weeks Ago

thank you Lorry, you are very kind :)

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