Connecting to the Source

Have you ever tried to feel

the resonance in the rumbling sound of the ocean?

Have you ever willed to recharge your soul with the effulgence

of a thunder-strike?

We have always stayed away from the originality.

This is why facade appears to be the face,

The artificiality prevails .

Reviews

[Karen]

In my opinion, originality is hard to come by these days. Most female singers sound the same; most movies are knock-offs of older movies; and reality tv is predictable. But Nature does find a way to bring us back to her so long as we have the sensitivities to hear her call. We feel her alluring drawing, but we shut her out of our daily lives where "artificiality prevails." Great poem!

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks a lot Karen. yes we are into age of facades !

[Linda alexander]

So deep message but it is the basic true fact ignored by all, walk to mature, learn from nature, tap energy from nature are basic learning lessons and we all stand at the learning curve, impressed

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear, for the kind review :)

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, my pleasure, take care my friend

[Eddie Phillips]

Ahh I love a poem that makes you question and meditate. I also like the images you convey as you ask your questions. It is a simple but powerful piece.

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much Eddie :)

[Saddam]

We have always stayed away from the originality.
This is why facade appears to be the face,
The artificiality prevails .
very nice anthem of nature and its resource. we all need to be true.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so much my dear friend :)

[Saddam]

you are welcome dear.

[EloisaWrites]

Wow. This one is a very affective and effective. Very spot on, on the message you are conveying. Great image and philosophic views, too. :)

[Anand Sehgal]

Thanks a lot dear Eloisa :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

We have always stayed away from the originality.
This is why facade appears to be the face,
The artificiality prevails .

You said it straight to the point, Arnand. Well done! :)

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you Blue, Gad that you felt connected to it :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Interesting questions posed here to your readers and I feel like this a lot. I muse about why there are not "real" new ideas in this world...
This poem makes the reader think and ponder.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so much dear Josie :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome!

[Latifa]

We have always stayed away from the originality.
This is why facade appears to be the face,
The artificiality prevails .
this party got me goosebumps

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks do much dear for the kind review :)

[Latifa]

you're welcome

[Vani Jalagar]

nice flow of words in the context of reality and artificiality........:)
good 1:)

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you dear Vani :)

[TL Boehm]

wow isn't this the truth - we are so mechanized - so air brushed. So prepackaged. We don't even live...Well penned.

[Anand Sehgal]

we are living in the reign of facades ! :(