A Change, The Change

Once my dreams became verbose ;
I woke up to see that my magic pen was missing.
It was sailing away ,
Riding on the tide,
defining a new era ,
I had lost my artistry by then ;
I realized I was a mere  period.
Periods are never the same.

Reviews

[DIVYA]

This is a very special write for me. It reminded me of writer's block. Writers go through phases of great changing as they are very sensitive individuals and life's events make deep impact on them. I am struggling with it for past several months and I could really connect to all you say in this great poem.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear Divya :)

[Madalyn Beck]

I have to agree with the other reviewer, Divya. This definitely made me think of writers block. Very artistically written!

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear. Glad that you felt connected :)

[Michelle N. H.]

I feel very lucky whenever I stumble upon something like this on here. Beautiful. You make me want to read more of you.

[Anand Sehgal]

thank you so much, I am honored.

[Vidya Bacchus]

people and times are constantly changing that is the only constant.Nice poetry

[Anand Sehgal]

no time to contemplate ! really !

[Vidya Bacchus]

really no time to contemplate lol

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

A period is a strong ending of what is started. Changes comes no matter what...

[Anand Sehgal]

yes , change keeps freshness flowing :)

[icelandicblue]

Maybe the period is a symbol for you to stop and observe. I am sure a comma or a dash will come along to get you back on track. ; )

[Anand Sehgal]

Hope to regain the form soon !

[Joiedevivre]

it has happened that i dream of a wonderful poem and when i wake up and by the time i try to write it it is gone! it is disappointing and i often feel like a period then, so it speaks to me! Nice one.

[Anand Sehgal]

writer's block is a hard thing to cope with ! :(

[Johanna]

Saved this to my reading list, it was really good! bottom two lines were amazing, just left you with thouts and wishing the poem was longer.. good job! :)

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you my dear friend for the review .Usually I keep it short because I am always afraid that I would end up boring my audience :(

[Mark Heathcote]

As people we I’s are always morphing into something else we recognise as our reality.
But what is reality? It is different for everyone and is in a constant a state of flux…
So we only trust what our senses tell us… and only imagine a greater meaning to it all.

[Anand Sehgal]

truly said by you, insightful remark :)