Verbal Swords

There is a lot of fighting going on in my family, so I wanted to express it in a poem.

Storms and fights

Come and go,

Endless nights

Just more and more.

Sister, brother

where are you?

You didn't bother,

You just betrayed me too.

Endless fights

Darkest storms 

Sleepless nights

Verbal swords.

Reviews

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

I hear your voice and feel your suffering. You are such a talented poet dear Anastasia. You deserve joy and love! The world needs to hear your voice! You can connect to so many people who care about you - count me as one. Keep writing as much as you can. Love & Hugs & Light sent from me to you xo!

[George Coombs]

A well crafted piece which might flow even better without the word 'just' in the concluding line of the second verse-its important that you keep writing and allow things to sort out, best wishes, George

[Raven Moonchild]

I understand this poem on a personal level. Don't worry,sweetheart,you are not alone. (hugs)

[Anastasia]

Thanks, *hugs*

[Raven Moonchild]

And listen,if you need someone to talk to,I'm here for you. :)

[Anastasia]

Sorry it's sort off pessimistic, but that's how I feel right now.