Suicide

I am too tired to live

I am too tired to cry 

What can I give?

Maybe I should die?

I was used as a doll

I was being abused

No one helps when I fall

My body was bruised

Can't cry

Can't live

Want to die

Don't know what to believe.

Reviews

[MysteriousAries]

Well expressed... Pouring it out sometimes through paper and quill helps miraculously... For that I am sure that the we are as strong as wall... And in time after all this sad event, we have an inspirational story to tell and a big heart to help the next generation who will experience the same...

[MadisonJR]

Wow i am blown away great work! I know how that feels. Life is tough but so are you. No matter what happens focus on writing and strive to help others. Thats how i kept moving forward.

[Karen John]

Don't let the world change ur smile❤

[Ethan]

Nice job :) A job well done.

[curvygirlrock]

wow really powerful . hang on there . life gets gets better. the poem was well written

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Sad and powerful poem. Please Anastasia, do not give up. You are a child of God and are loved always. Rest and be good to youself. Let the light and healing energy in. Reach out to someone who can help you. Things can change for the better in a minute or a day. I wish you hope and send you love xo :)

[Sapientiam]

I don't know if this is fictional or not, but killing yourself shouldn't be an option to cure a temporary problem, no matter how everlasting the pain may be currently. It seems that in this poem, you have gone through a great deal, things that no one should ever go through. However, your death will hardly make a change, rather, it will only hurt others. I do love how your poem is straightforward, lacking wordiness that is unnecessary for such a topic. Like those feelings, there's nothing more to it than despair from the constant torments of life, torments that will continue to visit us, even if we do recover. Though, don't lose hope in a beautiful tomorrow because you never know what the future may bring. Thank you for sharing this and I hope things go well for you!

[Raven Moonchild]

(bear hugs) This poem speaks to my soul.