Prick your finger

Written for the advertisement contest

 

 

Fascination

The feeling that leads us

To unknown emotions

 

Prick your finger

Enjoy the flood

Watch how it grows

 

Fascination

The deep red stream

A thorn in your heart

 

Prick your finger

It will bleed

Your soul will it feed

 

Fascination

The feeling that brings

The end of all

 

Prick your finger

The passion inside

Will make you enjoy

 

Fascination

Explodes in your mind

You flow eternally

 

Prick your finger

Sets you free

Watch how you grow

 

Reviews

[Silvia - Scribo, Ergo S..]

Well, you make a very compelling argument for enlightenment through pain ... an almost flaggelante approach or maybe the ways of a Hindu sadhu? ... Can indeed be quite e revelation not to shy away from a bit of pain, "pricking your finger" to grow, to expand. I like it!

[James K. Blaylock]

this seems like it could be a killer song to me. keep up the great writes.

[Fantasyfairy]

how pain can enlighten us with such fascination. A beautiful poem, very well written. XX

[Jasmina Amethyst Pendra..]

Ah yes my favorite subject matter. It's amazing how a little bit of pain can mean symbolize so many things to different people. Through pain we can be renewed or it can even destroy. it's all how much that "little prick" can mean to us. ~Liv