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Love at First Sight

Love at First Sight

A Poem by Anaya
"

I wrote this in 2007 after I saw this guy and thought it was love at first sight.

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What is this feeling

In my heart?

 

I've never felt it before

What could it be?

 

I see this guy

Then my heart skips a beat.

 

Do I hate him

or be afraid of him?

 

No

This feeling is different then those

 

I can only think of one word

That describes this feeling

 

Love


© 2010 Anaya



Author's Note

Anaya
What do you think in general?
Please let me know what I can improve on, thank you.

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I think in general, its good. One word "No" it kind of takes away the feeling of the poem, but then again in a way, it could be a more direct way of setting the mood. Good job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Added on January 7, 2010
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Anaya
Anaya

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I'm still learning new ways to write down the things that I want to write down and I'm hopeing to get better with every new story I write. more..

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