"Time To Spend With You..."

Thursday thoughts

“Time To Spend With You…”

 

In my thoughts

it’s sunny bright.

I'll write a bit -

close my eyes and dream of you

  for a bit prolly too.

 

Some dreams are just walks... in the sun

and others

are only just begun -

to places we never see

just feel - so deeply within

that I wonder the echoes

of our footsteps

as they ring -

peal like ancient bells

‘til each footfall brings

a deeper fullness,

a softer focus -

life's meaning to ...now

- ya know?

 

Chris

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Angel]

A walk where speckled sunlight shines down through green branches and cool breezes play in my hair...and time means nothing.
Thank you for taking me there...

[J. J. Nightingale]

Jazz was here ... Just can't find the words....

J.

[JenniferMarie]

You describe your emotions with these beautiful images, "some dreams are just walks .. In the sun," "the echoes of our footsteps" "each footfall leaves a deeper fullness" I really enjoy the tone. I saw the footsteps and felt that each step in his dream hes heavy with thoughts of her. Just beautiful.

[Chris]

It was nice of you to stop by... thank you.

[dukovan]

it all leads up to now, I think its timeless transition, this life.
We're so close to everything that ever happened, its like it never went away.
The bell is the center of this piece, to me.

[Chris]

It's been awhile. How are you?

[dukovan]

i feel free, like the liberty bell feels free, theres a crack in me, freedom has its price, thats ok though.
Its not fair, this life, its just real, and there is a freedom in that reality, a ringing truth. There is now a peace, an understanding. I wonder if that is what it is to be absolved, to fall into all your cracks and holes, to accept the reality, and faith to mend in time.
The "eventually" is big for me.
I'm just fine. How are you?

[Chris]

Listening to a friend - actually

[Lydia Shutter]

Walking is a great way to clear the mind and let the mind drift. Suddenly answers to questions you need answered appear. Very much like a dream.....and so peaceful. Lydi*

[Chris]

Hi Lydi...nice to see you

[Jack...]

This was outstanding. 'Some dreams are just walks...in the sun" Do they need to be anything more, what a wonderful start to a beautifu dream. Nice walking with you for a while my friend.

[Chris]

Thanks Jack... you on KZKO too?

[Jack...]

That's me...Finally realized who you were last week. I was the one who lost the bet.

[Chris]

Yeah...thought I recognized your work the week you MADE the bet.

[Frieda P]

You are a beautiful dreamer Chris....

[TL Boehm]

peal like ancient bells til each footfall brings a deeper focus. Up until this part the tone of this was like a little conversation....and then this beautiful statement took the whole thing to a resonance.
Wonderfully penned.

[Chris]

Think so TL? Cool, thanks.

[Kate H]

This stands out to me....nice piece.

[Chris]

I'm glad it caught your mind...thanks Kate

[Kate H]

Very welcome

[Ees]

I don't usually like words like "prolly" I do actually like it in this instance though. It's how we speak... I guess...

And no, I don't know. But I do know.
Nice layers and nice use of language. Very modern.

[Chris]

Hi... sometimes I feel we need to be HEARD with the "nows" ears and not just our always eyes.